Professor Szalay's
Composition Editing Key
Upper Division German - Advanced Courses
Vocabulary
v - poor choice / does not fit or inappropriate; literal translation from the English
v/o - missing or unnecessary item; check logic of construction
v/lx - wrong gender of noun; wrong plural of noun
un - unmöglich! No such word or construction exists in
German; includes the use of English words where German versions should be used,
e.g., Ich studierte im Library.
Spelling/Punctuation
sp - misspelling; capitalization error
p - punctuation error; umlaut error; missing or unecessary
punctuation
Morphology / Kasus (verb conjugation, case endings, articles)
m/o - missing article or unecessary use of article; missing ending on
plural dative, genitive masc./neuter, n-nouns
m/c - case error (e.g.: wrong or missing ending on article or secondary
word / adjective)
m/v - incorrect subject / verb agreement (person or number)
m/p - verb particles: incorrect or missing separable prefix or past participle
m/aux - wrong auxillary for verb construction (haben; sein; werden
for future or passive)
m/ifl - wrong verb stem form (strong vs. weak); if noun, wrong
inflection for the comparative / superlative forms (umlauts or verbs stems)
n-a-g - noun-adjective-agreement faulty in some way, e.g., Meiner guter Vater.
Syntax / Satzbau (word order and verbal constructions)
s/o - missing or unnecessary element (preposition, conjunction,
pronoun, subject)
s/v - incorrect placement of verb or verb particles (participles,
prefixes); check for: inverted word order; subordinate clauses; SVO - subject -
verb - object in main clause, infinitives with zu vs. modals; incorrect
placement of verb particles
s/adv - incorrect ordering of adverbial elements (time, manner, place)
s/n - incorrect or illogical placement of nicht / kein
Coherence
c - illogical: tense inconsistency: pronoun inconsistency;
indicative instead of subjunctive; or other non-sequitur resulting in
comprehension problem
c/p - poor organization of thoughts from one sentence or paragraph to
another
Style
st - overly simplistic: need for compound / complex sentences and /
or elaboration of content
X - one or more words are missing and must be inserted (exception:
reflexive pronouns)
+ - Any particularly nice (even elegant) touch for
which there may be extra points awarded
// - Double lines through a word indicate that it is not
necessary and must be deleted
? - A question mark adjacent to a word, clause or sentence
that is underlined indicates that the reviewer could make no sense of the
passage whatsover. The entire work needs to be rethought, and a native speaker
consulted.